Kindness is Our Strength (SA)

"Kindness is Our Strength" is based on a poem by Mahra Alhosani, This piece is SA featuring a solo part. Instruments included are piano and congas. I am not loving this piece and I feel like it is super sloppy and just missing something so please comment and let me know of some suggestions. Please also comment any questions or concerns. :D
-Emily R <3