dear dad

this song is for my dad, he's gone 7 different wars 9 different times, he's awesome. he just left home for a short period of time and is in southern California, he was their for work and he had a job interview as he's retiring. i can't talk very well, and so i thought i should use what i am good at to tell him i love him and that i'm happy he got the job. so i made this song, titled dear dad. please give me feedback and tell me how i might fix the end a little bit and tell me any other mistakes.