So yeah, I finished this, and I, personally, think it turned out really well, certainly better than the first version XD. I also have a tiny bit of evidence that it is really good: 2 of my family members say it's the best song I've written, and I got first place on Katryna Boelter's competition. It also wins the award of my longest song yet, and one of my few not-just-piano songs. Not that anything is bad with just writing piano songs, but variety is nice too :D About the song, anyone who saw the first publish knows that it was just the first, second, and beginning of the third sections. Katryna had said that the ending wasn't super great, and, tbh, I kinda agreed. She also extended the deadline to the 30th, so I decided to fix it. Even though my theme was peace, the last section was more... fear. But I also loved the melody of the last part, so I made it longer, and then repeated the first part. I also added a transition. And, It worked! I liked the song more and got first place which I'm happy about. Please like if you enjoy it, and until next song I publish, goodbye!
Actually, We'll all meet again in the comment section :D ;D