What's Next?

This was the first song I have ever written. It took me about 20 minutes to get the general idea about it down, but its been a whole year before I decided that I will publish it. Some of the rhythms aren't how I want them but I have no idea of the exact notation would be, this score is just the basis of the song, how I want it to be played(especially the last chorus) is a different than how its notated. The song is supposed to start off sad and then become "Happier" sounding. What ended up happening is that it sounds like an 80s movie training montage, to me at least


Also, I have another score that I would like assistance on finishing it up, --https://flat.io/score/639891ce8da382af8cf36797-git-movin-on