Originally, I was not planning on posting this, the song is an outright mess in the clear fact that I had no idea whatsoever where I was going with the different melodies there were at certain parts.
Of course, it may be a dumpster fire, but I'm still proud that I managed to keep a clear rhythm through the entire song, and the fact that this only took a few days to finish and polish up.
Anyway, constructive feedback is much appreciated :)