Looming Mist-Arrangement

Hello, nerds.
So, about two weeks ago, a user came to me and said that apparently I have skill and that they wanted me to recreate their song in my own style. Their user is @cheeseburga (FSII).
After two weeks, I have finally created the arrangement of it. It's much shorter than both of their remakes of "Looming Mist" but it's because I didn't want it to last too long and give that feeling of connection and relaxation.
One thing that is different from the original is that I replaced the Celesta with a Harp and added the Horn In F. Another minor change is the beginning is completely new and I DID add a big chunk of their original melody towards the middle, but I layered it with different harmonies and counter-melodies to add more "depth" to the piece.
Finally, the originals were great but it struggled with dynamic changes and so I challenged myself to add more dynamic and dramatic entries. Did it work?

Thank you for your special request and make sure to check out the original pieces to compare:

https://flat.io/score/6433e82c22fef115dc867f15-looming-mist-by-fsiii

https://flat.io/score/64640bab82efc889e46fde29-looming-mist-full-orchestra


Oh, and do give feedback, please! And like the score.