Dreaming with your Eyes Open

I recently got Flat Power for two months for completing a survey... so here's me trying to actually use it ;P
My first (and probably only) orchestral. It's meant to symbolize those moments during the day when you start to dream, but with your eyes wide open, staring into the sunshine.

I would so appreciate it if anyone has feedback, cause I feel like this is a little chaotic at times.

Thanks for reading this, and have a blessed week!
-Kitri