The Piece Before Time

This is my first piece that I've published. I've started a few but never really got around to finishing them. I hope you can enjoy it, and tell me what your favorite part was, and what I could change to make it better.

"Long ago, their was nothing, a vast void of pain and sorrow. The universe was none and only darkness could be found. Then, hope was born, blinding the creatures of the dark and bringing about hope. With the spark, light flourished and eventually grew to be life. Magical, this piece represents the light born from the dark in the world, ready to jump out and save the world at a moments notice. All it needs is a push..."