You're not loosing yet

The 5th? composition I've made for eden, I'm really proud of it (it took me like a month of planning and thinking, ik i suck TwT)
Facts:
I write with some symbolism, if you wanna know what is what you can ask me and ill explain
Please find some way to tell me to make this better, even if its just a dynamic or a singular note please let me know
Have fun flat-ians!
(had to re-up for desc change)