The Final Gambit (this is just a preview)

This piece's violin was heavily inspired by IVAN's "HELP ME, I'M LOST...-⎜MAY CHALLENGE ⎜". The link to their piece is here -> https://flat.io/score/6645b1b76777770b20fd9515-help-me-i-m-lost-may-challenge This is something that I've been working on for a little while but I have been busy with schoolwork and stuff like that. School has just ended for me today and now I can take this more seriously and try to put some serious effort into this. This is just a preview of the piece, the finished product is nowhere near complete. If anyone has any advice or anything to make this piece better that would be great to know. Also for some reason when I tried to add a tie on one of the measures (I forgot which one) for some reason it wouldn't work and idk why.