Project Aus (Demo)

This is a piece that I kinda just started last night. Sorry for not uploading anything good really I have just been really busy with school and my week is very stressful. The 2nd riff is from the song "Rammstein" from the band with that same name in their 1995 album "Herzeleid". I'm not sure why the 2nd riff sounds kinda off so if anyone can help me with that I would appreciate it. I'm going to work on this some more and try to make it better but I thought that this piece would be a little different then my other ones and I want to make this into something decently serious but idk when I have time to work on it really so I will try to finish it by the end of the week.