Waltz of the Unwinds - October Competition

Inspiration from the book Unwind…

You descend the stairs, or ascend them. Or perhaps you’re just walking straight. You have no way of knowing. You have lost all sense of direction long ago.
How long have you been walking? Minutes? Hours? Days? You have lost all sense of time, as time seemed to swirl all around you in all directions as you walked onward.
Darkness enveloped you, until you could see no more. You were in some house, that you remember. Rumor was it that all the Unwind’s souls were held here, and you wanted to check it out for yourself. But now, as the darkness enveloped you, everything felt distant and unreal. Are those… voices? You walk on, but in the darkness you appear to be going nowhere.
You can’t feel anything, see anything, and the panic arising seems distant. You decide you had enough and turn for the exit… but where is the exit? All you could see is darkness, pressing in on you, in all directions. You turn and run in a random direction, but are you running? You can’t feel the ground under your feet, and suddenly you are not sure if the ground was there, or if the house was there, or if you are even there. Suddenly, you feel yourself doubting existence. Perhaps, nothing was there after all. Perhaps life was just one big false memory and nothing is real after all.
You collapse to the floor, desperate to feel something, something to assure you that this is real, that anything is real. Instead, you drop, descending, down, down, down, deep into the nothingness, as the voices, the Unwind’s voices, you realize, get louder and louder, and then…
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This is a republish from the october competition and I will not post any more songs until someone likes or comments on this one.