Search Party-piano duet

Thanks to dinhy's Search Party on Musecore, I used it a bit to correct quite a few things.

The large door shuts behind you. You are traumatized from the black site, specifically the hell you just endured. You lost track of how many pitch-black rooms you ran through, your only hope being the lights that came on ever so often. The number of anglers was insane, the rooms unlike anything you had ever seen before. The speakers, and the bodies of others like you with their head gone, you can't stand to think about it anymore. You have the crystal and you are going home. The power comes back on, and so does the PA. NO! WHY!?! WHY IS THERE MORE!?!?!? You walk down to the airlock in "the ridge" and it opens. You figure this should be easy, go out, fix wires, and Lucy is there to help. You swim out into a path lightened up by more of those green markers. You know to stay close, stray too far, and the parasites will get you. You pass through a small clearing and hear a familiar noise. If brings back recent memories. How are they here! You approach the end and see the light of Lucy shining down, then you see it, a Searchlight. NO. Not again. Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.Not again.No.

Hi, this is my arrangement on Search Party by NoLongerNull from Pressure. It's a piano duet, as you can tell by the title. Leave your critiques and other thoughts in the comments. Yes, the low notes are purposeful. It sounds good that way. Yes, the entire segment 1 is changed. Yes, that affected a few other lines. Other than that, it's a mistake (probably). If it sounds bad, tell me where. Thank you for the advice.

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