Adventure! 1 & 2

Hello to anyone who may see this. I've recently gotten the premium version of Flat for Christmas and wanted to write a whole thing with it. I decided to go for a marching show. I've written the whole thing except for the closer now, but I won't publish the whole thing until I get the closer finished. Take this as a sneak-peak of sorts! I hope you enjoy it, and if you do, let me know! Also if you think it could be better in places, then feel free to tell me! I want to make this as great as possible!