Recollection (Work in Progress)

This is a work in progress and I've basically scraped it but if anyone wants to fix it plz do, btw this is my first music piece I have done so if you have any tips or any constructive criticism about it please tell me. I really want it to work out but the parts keep on conflicting with eachother and to me at least it sounds pretty bad. Thx for looking btw I know I'm saying this again but if you have any tips about this and or criticism please tell me