Pie Smasher
April Challenge
So, I've got a new piece and I had a great idea, but failed to execute it:(
Its not bad, and the beginning is pretty good, but its rushed. Someone please give feedback on the ending
I chose the classing pie to the face prank, and I even made a whole story to go with it:
Its 2:49 in the afternoon on march 31st, and tomorrow is April fools! You stare at the clock, waiting to jump out of your seat and sprint home with your friends and make the best prank ever and finally, right on time, the clock ticks to 2:50 and the bell rings. You sprint to your house, with no regard to anyone in your path and as you arrive you wait for your friends running behind you a few yards away. Then, you start to tell them your magnificent plan on how you plan to make a MASSIVE pie and smash it in your older sisters face using a trebuchet, and of course everyone agrees! You get to work, sawing and hammering wood to make a trebuchet and when you finish you rush to make the pie. You bought pie crust beforehand so all you have to do is bake it, and that's exactly what you to. You don't even put any toppings on it, just pure whipped cream, then you put the pie in the fridge and go to sleep. When you wake up, you rush down the stairs and call your friends across the street to come over. They all arrive and then you set up the prank as your sister walks down the stairs into the trap, you lure her near the table with the pie on it and as you're about to press the button that would launch the pie in her face, she speaks. "Wait, I heard you guys speaking earlier" Immediately panic surges in your body and you press the button! nothing happens. You hear the trebuchet swing but then you look at your sister, the pie in her hands, and then she SMASHES it in your face!
I suck at writing stuff lol
if you see this I'm throwing a pie in your face
Its not bad, and the beginning is pretty good, but its rushed. Someone please give feedback on the ending
I chose the classing pie to the face prank, and I even made a whole story to go with it:
Its 2:49 in the afternoon on march 31st, and tomorrow is April fools! You stare at the clock, waiting to jump out of your seat and sprint home with your friends and make the best prank ever and finally, right on time, the clock ticks to 2:50 and the bell rings. You sprint to your house, with no regard to anyone in your path and as you arrive you wait for your friends running behind you a few yards away. Then, you start to tell them your magnificent plan on how you plan to make a MASSIVE pie and smash it in your older sisters face using a trebuchet, and of course everyone agrees! You get to work, sawing and hammering wood to make a trebuchet and when you finish you rush to make the pie. You bought pie crust beforehand so all you have to do is bake it, and that's exactly what you to. You don't even put any toppings on it, just pure whipped cream, then you put the pie in the fridge and go to sleep. When you wake up, you rush down the stairs and call your friends across the street to come over. They all arrive and then you set up the prank as your sister walks down the stairs into the trap, you lure her near the table with the pie on it and as you're about to press the button that would launch the pie in her face, she speaks. "Wait, I heard you guys speaking earlier" Immediately panic surges in your body and you press the button! nothing happens. You hear the trebuchet swing but then you look at your sister, the pie in her hands, and then she SMASHES it in your face!
I suck at writing stuff lol
if you see this I'm throwing a pie in your face
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